well, I am grateful to you for your help^^.

Its just that I think the red blood will make the wall lost its black-white contrast =="

This is the latest revision
http://img187.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1600x1200v15tr4.jpg

or maybe you prefer this one, I changed the colour again
http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1600x1200v14vz7.jpg

err... he may look like Gaara but he is not ==". It's Jio Freed in 666satan of Kishimoto Seishi

so I removed the text and change the white part into light grey http://img211.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1600x1200v7aq7.jpg

And this is my latest revision
http://img442.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1600x1200v12tn8.jpg
The vector is sharper and I tried to make the white part look like a mirror. I think its better ( again, its just what I think ... Y_Y)

Thank you for your suggestion D

Its me again =='' I tried to fix my previous wall like everyone had recommended but I think it is not better somehow If you still want to take a look at the final revision, its welcome http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e130/nizsu/kirin.jpg
Thank to alterlier ,Erdbeermilch & Futatsunonegaifor giving me the ideas, I am sorry I gave up on it ...

Anyway, I started to make a new one, the colours are just black and white. I don't know why I made it this way but I truly have no sense of colouring

So Here it is

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/3078/1600x1200v5ht3.jpg
and this is another revision . . .
http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1600x1200v6cc5.jpg

I would like to know whether get rid of the text is a better idea too, thank everyone

I just want to express that he had a hard childhood, so I thought of flowers with blood. Flowers are something pure like everyone's childhood, and the flowers got blood on it, i wanted to mean his childhood was dirty with blood I donno whether it sounds logical... X_X Or are flowers only suitable with the girls? ...

Now i am not free enough but soon I will fix the blood splatter like Erdbeermilch said and working on the strong green as well^^. There's no design on his clothes in the original image, its just black and white X_X but i would try to add some...

I am sorry for my crappy english.

ps thank alterlier, futatsunonegai,erdbeermilch and northy very much for giving me ideas of how to work better I would show u guys another revision soon

arh. . . so this is what I came up with. Can you take a look at it? thank a bunch

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e130/nizsu/kirin3-1.jpg

err... actually I received a critique that I am reliant on stock filter too much and my vector is angular ;_;

So I tried to draw flowers and petals in the background. But then it looked a little bit plain. Eventually, i used a stock photo and changed it a little bit ( use stock filter again ). I don't know if it is better or totally worse but. . . if you don't mind can you take a look at it

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e130/nizsu/kirin3.jpg

I know it is a mess , just tell me your opinion or even a critique, it helps me take a honest look in my skills. I am appreciate that . Thank you a lot too FutatsuNoNegai and alterlier. (Futatsu you know I have 2 Maylaysian friends and they are very kind too^^)

. . .yes actually i havent seen a pickle in my life
its not rude at all, u re giving ur honest ideas. finnally i know i am not good and noob. i would try to work harder and have ur questions answered

Please i am begging you tell me how to improve more
i tried my best but everything is not alright all the time

So... just tell me honestly.Thank you

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e130/nizsu/kirin2copy.jpg